Hey, sweet girl I used to love
Do you remember me?
Do I randomly flit across your mind
And take away your breath?
Do you remember touching me
Holding me so tight?
The way I smiled, how I glowed
How our lips moved in tune?
I was so shy, but you so sure
My daylight was so weak
My body fit just right with yours
Do you remember that?
Hey, sweet girl I used to love
I still remember you
You suddenly jump into my brain
And take away my breath
I sometimes crave your touch so much
Long for your eyes, your kiss
I wonder how we've changed since then
And if we're still in love
Do you now have another girl
One you can hold and kiss?
If that is so, then I don't mind
Be warm and loved by her.
Author notes
For my first love, Donna. Also inspired by the song "Walking Away" by Lifehouse.
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Awww, Hannah. That one's really sweet and I loved how you said everything. I think that both of our poetry is evolving, and yours is definitely going good places. ^_^ Well, I could feel the love in your words...it almost seems like it would make a good song, too!
loves
M
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Wow! This is very beautiful sis! I think we all feel this way about our first love sometimes... We all wonder how things would be now. Anway, this is good! I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Love ya, sis!
♥Chelsea -
That was so sweet. I really liked the 'I wonder how we've changed since then
And if we're still in love,' I thought that was very touching.
Love ya,
-Dlvvanzor
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