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In Lust

Raw forces of the dark to form,
Yonder blow the clouds of war.
Turmoil in the sky ready to erupt,
To thunder, lightening I will call.

The mistress of the sea roars,
In waves breaking to the shore
Love me, know the divine will,
True you shall never ever fall.

Hit the heights I have battles,
And courage bursting in me,
Mind flies, wings lift my soul,
Away from the lust and sin:

Lord devil playing in passion,
Covets again, as I burn in hell:
My chi has always bleed for you,
Hold me in your love to quivers.

I yearn for the soft caress
Embrace, so I live again.  

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  • Angelflower
    October 3, 2008

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    This was a very interesting take on the prompt.. The imagery was nice and vivid, you did a wonderful job on the prompt.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • FlamesDragoness
    September 13, 2008

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    Swords salute to you....she writes with bold heart
    fearless and true!
    What a seductress this gentle warrior feasts upon us.
    Wonder what potions she is up to?
    flamesdragoness