Here I rest, after journeys end
Where long winds of darkened sky place me,
Viewing from a height safe from prying eyes,
But close enough to see what lies below.
Your saviour of truth,
the darkened angel of minds storms,
turning what once was light,
to a shadow of the past.
Never fear the dreams you hold,
never wonder from where I came,
from within every heart lies a shadow,
and there is where you will find me.
Blending in with the surroundings,
I still do an angels work,
keeping darkness from taking over,
with the courage born of the midnight skies.
I will be your guide,
never cast me off without thought,
because both sides of life need care,
not all that is dark is evil.
Where long winds of darkened sky place me,
Viewing from a height safe from prying eyes,
But close enough to see what lies below.
Your saviour of truth,
the darkened angel of minds storms,
turning what once was light,
to a shadow of the past.
Never fear the dreams you hold,
never wonder from where I came,
from within every heart lies a shadow,
and there is where you will find me.
Blending in with the surroundings,
I still do an angels work,
keeping darkness from taking over,
with the courage born of the midnight skies.
I will be your guide,
never cast me off without thought,
because both sides of life need care,
not all that is dark is evil.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
600 points, ended October 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was really great! I loved this side of the prompt! The story line was so strong.. I couldn't stop reading it once I started! You did such a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest..
Angel
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WOW!
for within the heart there does lie a shadow and all that is dark is not evil...for from the dark the light grows brighter and to some a protector does emerge...has winner wrote all over it my love

niaish for sharing that wonderful mind with us

nemehotatse



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This is a wonderful perception of the picture prompt. I love the word choice and the images they and the whole poem paint in the mind. Best to you in the contest


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Nice job B.I. Showing the softer side of darkness
C


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Well told story... "within every heart lies a shadow,
and there is where you will find me." A wonderfully insightful phrase... Excellent poem. Best of luck.
Ken

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