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Casting Shadows

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Here I rest, after journeys end
Where long winds of darkened sky place me,
Viewing from a height safe from prying eyes,
But close enough to see what lies below.

Your saviour of truth,
the darkened angel of minds storms,
turning what once was light,
to a shadow of the past.

Never fear the dreams you hold,
never wonder from where I came,
from within every heart lies a shadow,
and there is where you will find me.

Blending in with the surroundings,
I still do an angels work,
keeping darkness from taking over,
with the courage born of the midnight skies.

I will be your guide,
never cast me off without thought,
because both sides of life need care,
not all that is dark is evil.

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  • Angelflower
    October 3, 2008

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    This was really great! I loved this side of the prompt! The story line was so strong.. I couldn't stop reading it once I started! You did such a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 13, 2008

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    WOW!

    for within the heart there does lie a shadow and all that is dark is not evil...for from the dark the light grows brighter and to some a protector does emerge...has winner wrote all over it my love

     

    niaish for sharing that wonderful mind with us

     

    nemehotatse


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    This is a wonderful perception of the picture prompt. I love the word choice and the images they and the whole poem paint in the mind. Best to you in the contest


  • Cannonsfire
    September 12, 2008
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    Nice job B.I. Showing the softer side of darkness C


  • KayJay
    September 12, 2008

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    Well told story... "within every heart lies a shadow,
    and there is where you will find me." A wonderfully insightful phrase... Excellent poem. Best of luck.
    Ken

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