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Writing Love Story

Beneath twinkling stars
Hearts melt into one
As we dance to melodies
Of this moment of ours
Writing love story

A contest entry

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 15, 2008

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    i like this, the simplest of moments taken as a story, keep it flowing my friend, good luck in the contest.


  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008
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    lovely i like this one a whole lot
    well done


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    how sweet

    twinkling stars are very romantic, and to be able to enjoy with some one special is extra nice, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    OH SO SWEET!!!!!

    Just the way love should be, precious oh so very precious.