the way you look in to my eyes
makes me believe
in me
in you
in us
- i love you
A contest entry
- Romance (20 words) by HopelessScribbles.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done! Short and sweet. Some people cant pull off the short poems, but you could!! Nicely done
Sydney

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pretty plain and true... In the this small poem you told alot nice work as always.


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awwwwwwwwwwww so sweet
well done -
good post
when both believe, love will succeed, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda -
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