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the way

the way you look in to my eyes
makes me believe
in me
in you 
in us
      - i love you

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  • Painted Nails
    November 9, 2008

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    Well done! Short and sweet. Some people cant pull off the short poems, but you could!! Nicely done
    Sydney


  • fangs to blame
    September 19, 2008
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    pretty plain and true... In the this small poem you told alot nice work as always.


  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwwww so sweet
    well done


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    good post

    when both believe, love will succeed, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda


  • paperbackwriter
    September 12, 2008
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    What do you think?

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