You make me feel
That ive healed
What can I say
Today
You make it hard to say
Ill go
I wish I could stay
You made me feel accepted
No longer neglected
Looked over
Just another girl
But you make it hard to say
Ill stay
Can I depend on you
Will you be true
Can you be what I need
Or are you to addicted to weed
To see
I can fill the void you seek
Give me a week
Ill be your out
You can count on me
Ill help you out
But you see
This magic world you seek
Isn’t real life
So just go
Light up another piece
And see
How easy it is to be rid of me
Author notes
ok not so great but i am trying to get away from the dark stuff and this is the first thing ive writin sence the last post
Comments
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this is a very serchung piece,it's a great insite to the emotions of the narrater.I think the rhyme was a little forced at the begining of the poem,but over all a great write!
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haha thankx i kno im not much if a rhymer AT ALL lol this is one of two tht rhymes lol but thanx!
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