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A lesson in economics

I'm so alive
          walking down first and main
for a job interview.

Those CEOs, bosses and coworkers
  sing the hymn of productivity
      while biting the hand that buys them coffee
at four bucks a pop.

    Hooray for modern hypocrisy!
                    Rejoice in the economy!

  But stay deaf to the Salvation Army's
        beckoning church-bell
 
  Cain's spare change will
    liquify into gasoline eventually
  because you are not your brother's keeper;
      you are society's modern slave.

Author notes

The spacing in each line represents the fluctuation in the worth of a dollar, inflation, and the economic system of production, distribution and consumption.
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First attempt at satiric-y poetry.
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