Look at us dance
Love
you will find
from the tips of our fingers
to the depths of our mind
Author notes
20 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Romance (20 words) by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is so beautiful i loved it i got reminded of my bf and i
well done
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good poem
Liked it so much I was toying with an additional line
for what it's worth== "Deep in our hearts our love will grow.Sweetheart of mine,I love you so."
Best Wishes and Kindest Regards George ++++ -
Wonderful write and an excellent take on the prompt.
Good luck in the contest.
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wow
you set such a mood with this piece
with the moving image and with your words
so very lovely
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trembling
as the dance exausts our hearts to our minds as we feel the passion and emotion rise to a whole new realm, thank you for this entry, it took me away for a minute, good luck
Linda
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