A winding road through emmense evergreens
Such a natural sight for the common eye to see.
But if you take a closer look you shall find,
A simple jewel hiddin within the vines.
Bright ruby feathers, milk chocolate feet,
Praying on a single strand of meat.
Wings spread and beak opened wide,
With a burst of agility it claims its prize.
And behind those emmense evergreens
Such a natural view for the common eye to see,
A little girl grasps in fright
As she witnesses such a glorious sight.
Author notes
this is what looking out the window during school does to you. 
Penny for your thoughts please and thank you. :)
Comments
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Cute
it needs some developmet but a good place to start from
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Aww, that's sweet, very day-dreamy, and well-written. I loved how short and sweet it was, great write!
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This is really amazing,
I loved it soo much!
you word usage, rhyme scheme, everything was perfect
I was really glad to read something from you;
this was worth the wait
Phaethon
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