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Still for you

I'll tell you this
secret
I'll explain
in shadow

Once upon a time
I fell in love
adored ever whisper
from your lips

And as the sun fell
shadows hid us both
I gave you my soul

But you broke it.
You took this
beauty
I once had
and cracked it
till blood ran

So long ago
many moons past
yet I sit here
in my shadows
remembering

Though
in bandages still
though
you became my pain
ruined me

My soul throbs
heart beats
for you.

Author notes

Picture Credit: http://h-ybrid.deviantart.com/art/Because-I-love-you-73317732

Its not under 60 words, but I was inspired by the picture. So

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  • KayJay
    September 13, 2008

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    I know the feeling... and it won't count against you A nice dark write with straying into the ghoulish... Well done and all my best...
    Ken