deep within the mind
lies a fragile sanity
deep within the heart
lies a fragil soul
we hold on to each
for what seems
like dear life
because both of these
lie within us
but deep within these
lies somthing more
there deep within them
lies a stubborn child
no matter how old we grow
even if our frigile mind fades
even if our fragile soul dies
the stubborn child
still remains
deep within us
no matter what.
Author notes
okay. you said to put our choice and age. obviously my choice is deep within. and i am 13, turning 14 in may.
A contest entry
- [14 and under] Title Choice by Miyuki.
600 points, ended September 13, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ooooh I really like this! The ending is very cool
I missed talking to you. How have you been?
-broken bambi (hollie)
hmm I think I may have been forgotten-not-lost or sleeping-ugly when we talked I cant remember
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