I see the beauty,
though you hide,
I see the doubt
in your glorious eyes
Please do not shun,
do not turn away,
let me come close
I beg you to stay
A few moments longer
shall I look upon this face
and a few more whispers
I'll fall in love with Grace
Angel of mine,
let me paint you in stone
so this beauty may also
to the world, be known.
A contest entry
- PIF/Picture Inspired (just because) by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended September 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats on the HM my daughter.
You out shown your mama.
and I love your take here.
Riftkin
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Holy hell! this is amazing the rhyming is so great and the flow is fantasic...well done really
I really really love this poem and I think you are very talented..you've a way with words.
The last stanza is by far my favorite...it ended so well and left me wanting more...great write really
Well Done,
-Dusty-
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Thank you for a very beautifful write for this photo. The flow and imagery are wonderful indeed.
Gaylene
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O.O
A beautiful piece! Great write for the prompt. I love the flow and imagry, nicely done
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