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Is dancing a Seduction?

Missing image
Under the crescent moon...
Two lovers dance
Their hearts away.
Will their romance
continue
Or die like a faded rose?

dragonheart1

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  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008
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    verry seet i liked it alot
    well done


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Well done on this piece
    thanks for sharing.

    beautiful in content


    and indeed i believe dancing is
    soothes the soul and the companion
    beside you

    great job


  • maralisa silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    a beautiful take on the image love nowadays for many seems to fade like a rose for many but then in many hearts it blooms and bloosoms forever good luck in the contest


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    You posed a good question here Dave. It makes the reader wonder. Hopefully the romance will blossom. Thanks again!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    wow this is

    somewhat sad in thought, very good question inserted into this poem, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda

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