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Unlife Until You

Lost until I found you
once without rhyme or flow
I settled in below
clawing at the sides
until rebirth.

Author notes

ahhh..wtf...just for shits and giggles...hope you enjoy..

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Congruence
    September 15, 2008
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    Interesting... lol

    xx


    • vici377
      September 15, 2008
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      James
      thank you so much for your comment and support..
      blessings my dear friend..
      namaste..
      r


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    LOL....love the AN and yes, very much enjoyed Good luck hunni


  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008
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    ahh this is sweet i liked it

    • vici377
      September 15, 2008
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      thank you so much for your kind comment..
      blessings
      namaste..
      r


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    ahhh..wtf...just for shits and giggles...hope you enjoy

    Tee-Hee...I did enjoy!


    Az


    • vici377
      September 14, 2008
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      my sweet sister..only a slave to my muse..when she inspires I write..hehe..
      blessings..
      namaste..
      r


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    i sure enough giggled
    well done.
    lmao

    best wishes

    • vici377
      September 14, 2008
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      thank you so much for your kind comment..
      blessings..
      namaste..
      r


  • moon2u
    September 12, 2008
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    I love the authors notes hehe


    • vici377
      September 12, 2008
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      my sweet friend thank you so much for your kind comment and support..have a great weekend..

      blessed be..
      r


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    it was sweet

    you did show a way of schanging thoughts of love, thank you for this entry
    good luck
    Linda

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