Without façade,
you accept me for who I am.
Without condition,
you accept my heart.
Without you...
...I am diminished.
Author notes
Prompt: 20 words of romance
Picture Credit: http://pavlova.deviantart.com/art/The-ways-of-love-23408858
20 words
A contest entry
- Romance (20 words) by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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Aaawww, very romantic. Well done.
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awwwwwwwwwww so sad to let the one you love know just how much well done
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oh now this is sweet...indeed
my dear you nailed the prompt
well done and best wishes to you
loved this
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Thank you.. it's a loser
but it's what was in my heart and mind... Phewwww... glad it's passed Thanks for the comments and appreciation...
Ken
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aww this is really beautiful! and very full of love.. You did such a wonderful job!! best of luck!
Angel
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nice use of 20 words here. you captured the prompt extremely well within your poem.
good luck in the contest my lover
kat
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How sweet Ken. Deeply romantic. It would be wonderful to feel that toward someone and vice versa. Best of luck to you!
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fluffy poem
awwwwwww, I love this as it shows strong contentment,
you penned this with such love, thank you for awwwing me with this entry
Good luck
Linda
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