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the reason

Youre the reason I get out of bed each day
Motivation to do good in life
Love is my reason

A contest entry

yup yup lol

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  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008

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    awwwwwwww so sweet
    somone should feel so happy
    that their the reason someone goes on
    well done


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Well done on this piece
    thanks for sharing.

    beautiful in content
    sweet and full of pureness enjoyed this


  • Justmenow
    September 13, 2008

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    babe a good poem short, sweet and effective, hate to do this but second line, spelt motivation wrong. lol.

    Youre the reason I get out of bed each day

    a feeling i wish i could feel, well done baby

    x


    • Lonely Christina
      September 13, 2008
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      lol thanks and oh yea i see tht now...i was really sick and tired when i wrote it haha


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    lovely

    your sentiment is so evident, your penn stroked each word with gentleness, thank you for this entry ...good luck
    Linda

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