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We're

People walking
People rushing
Have to get to class
Have to get to work.
Rain falls
Sun shines.
I pass you
You pass me
No hello
No goodbye
We're strangers
But we live and breath
Eat and Sleep
All of this,
Together
On one campus
We're lonely
We're forgotten
We're friends
We're students
We're people
One goes here
One goes there
Where do we all come from?
I come from there
You come from here.
Each has a story
Each has a past
Will you share
Will I listen
Leaves fall
Snow glistens
Birds sing
Sun shines
All of this
On one campus
All of this
belongs to here
I belong
You belong
We're diverse
But we're one.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    Very intersting and I love the imagery in this.
    Great flow throughout it. Your words are very
    thought provoking here. Well done!




    Jeremy0826


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    I agree! These situations could happen anywhere at any time. There is an urgency in the voice written here. You did well poet. Love the jolted lines.


    Much Love ♥

    Reneé