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Tranquility

Solidity exists only in
the essence of the mind

A tranquil peace passes through
the content of which liquid surrounds

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  • Gypsie Ink
    September 16, 2008

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    Provocative!

    Intense and deep. A fascinating write. Thank you for your fresh entry and best of luck in my contest.


  • Riamh
    September 13, 2008
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    A peaceful, dreamy write. Best of luck in the contest.
    Be well,
    Slayer


  • Lexie
    September 12, 2008

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    wow i loved it, even though i didn't look at the picture, the words in this piece of work is enough for me. absolutely incredible. i loved hwo you made it sound. so hypnotizing.

    the content of which liquid surrounds
    great job!