Cup my ass, as I come down.
Cover my mouth, if i make a sound.
Leave dark marks across my breast.
This is the kind of sex that I love best.
Hold me down, and dive deeper.
Heat has drenched me, like a harsh fever.
Pull my hair, and spank me hard.
They hear my moans from across the yard.
Tease me, please me, I am so close!
whisper dirty, as I curl my toes.
my back arches, all feelings erupt!
damn baby, I really needed to be fucked!
A contest entry
- Erotica Challenge by LaylaLace.
1200 points, ended September 21, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensual Moments. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 23, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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streight off, caught my attention, not an easy task for my dislexic mind! loved the poetry here! great job!
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Damn, this is so good, Amber! I think you sure are a damn good erotic poet and your stories aren't that bad, either... actually, they're amazing. I think you're a wonderful poet and the imagery and the words in this pretty much screams 'Hey, I'm great!'
Keep up the great work and surely, you'll find your own way in life.
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Thank you for your most beautiful and sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This was hot!
I loved the rhyme
even more so the usage of your words
Erotic and mmmm yummy!
Got me hot just reading it
Purrrrrfection!
TT
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short and hot... as it should be if it is not... long and hot, lol. anything in between the extremes is a waste of time. liked the tempo and the wording and there’s nothing obscene about it, just erotic and lustful. great shorty and... quickie
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Not so much slow and smoldering as it was fast and firey. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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mmm ur gonna get urs lil laday! u just wait! i like this tho im all turned on now. grrrr!
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rawr! hehe
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