Mother nature lives, embracing human life
bringing different season's with all of it's strife.
Stormy skies filled with tremendous rain
bringing living hearts gut wrenching pain.
Darkened skies moving into other places,
clearing new found light upon peoples faces.
Mother nature with human life bringing sensations,
coloring our world with wondrous creations.
Experiencing life with natures seasons,
storms passing by, calming comes with reasons.
Rainy days with darkened thundering cries,
new dawn unfolding tears into rainbow skies.
Written by: Kelle Marie Stavron
September 12, 2008
Author notes
OPTION 1
Light After Rain
By Tom Barron
400mm x 400mm
Painting Sold
A contest entry
- Tom Barron Scottish Landscape Painter, Artist & Musician Multiple Prompts Contest by Kazytc.
2400 points, ended September 16, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Under the rainbow by trekkergirl.
900 points, ended November 26, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Creation is a marvelous wonder with human life as well as nature, don't you think?
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I just have to say that I absolutely love this picture. And the poem is excellent too. I enjoyed reading it! I almost said it didn't have anything to do with rainbows but in the very end it does. Thanks for sharing this wonderful little write and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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Ah..how you did it..? such a vast concept you have captured in few lines tributing this great mother earth..a heart warming poetry you did..well done..and yes thanks for this poem...
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Beautiful write here
I love the way you spoke through the pic on this write and enjoyed it very much
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Beautiful words here!
Wow this is so rich and the cosy feel here too love the beautiful enchanting feel and ambiance, so deep and drawing and you paint so well with words and sentiments, full of emotion and feeling, and your poetic words and graphics sing in the soul and animate so well your muse.
Bravo on this one its fantastic!
Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions for entering our contest and best of luck to you too!
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Lovely work, dark, very moving and full of hope.
Thank you !!
Best wishes
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Beautiful
Such a beautiful write! You've done a great job with the picture. Discribing it perfectly.
Good luck with the contest!
Hugs!!!
Cayla
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Beautiful sissy,
Amazing words you captured my emotions and thoughts.
You have a way of expressing like no other.
This was amazing dear one!
Love,
sissy
~Lisa~
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Oh sweet Lisa thank you so much for your encouraging kind comment. Yes as you know I'm the emotional one of sorts. Your loving kindness has helped me to move along this year as well as to learn from you and others the beauty of poetry.
Many Blessings Always
Much Love Your Sissy,
Kelle Marie
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You have
succeeded in integrating human life and nature into a dynamic expressive poem. Your words: "new dawn unfolding tears into rainbow skies" bring hope - a sort of inner cleansing [espcially for those that know]. Lovies to you. Frans
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Oh Frans you have been such a blessing to me. That you for your beautiful comment on my poem of nature and human life. It was a fun write to go with the picture. Yes my favorite too is "new dawn unfolding tears into rainbow skies" This is like an inner cleansing ans so freeing!!!
Many Blessings
Much Love Always
Kelle Marie
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This is so lovely sis! It holds such truth about how the seasons can be a metaphor for our emotions and the turmoil in our life, that the sun will still shine and we can find joy.
You captured something amazing from that painting!
Love to you!
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Oh Jacks thank you so much for your kind and encouraging comment. Yes it is so true how seasons are definitely a part of everyones life. Of course for me I'm always emotional. LOL
Love You To,
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
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This has quality rhyme and rhythm. It flows like mother nature. I agree that the image supports your wonderful writing. The most significant element is your enchanting way of embracing the essence of nature.
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What a lovely comment to my poem about mother nature and human life. I so appreciate this encouraging comment, expecially right now in my life.
Many Blessing To You
Kelle Marie
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the natural beauty within nature is breathtaking, and you wonderfully describe its many different facets... beautiful write
good luck in the contest
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and the beautiful comment. I thank you for your encouraging words expecially coming from such a fin poet as you.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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A beautiful look at mother natures landscape of beauty. So poetic and loving.
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Thank you for reading my new poem about life and nature. Your loving encouraging words help to give me strength when I feel so weak. Thank you so much for your ongoing support.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Beautiful
Oh wow this is just so stunningly beautiful
indeed!...love the imagery and flow...this is
truly a masterpiece here and thank you for sharing with us,A pleasure to read indeed,Hazel
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Oh Wow thank you so much for your lovely comment. It is much appreciated and so encouraging.
Wishing You Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Just Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kelle....I love this it is one of your best yet!!! And it fits so well with the picture..It comes across like colorful tears streaking through the sky like a broken rainbow....Your writing just continues to get better all the time...Your vocabulary paints such exquisite imagery!!! Just totally awesome girl...Thanks for sharing your gift with all of here!!!~~~Toni~~~
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Thank you Toni for your very kind comment. You have been such a wonderful encouraging friend. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed, especially with the pic. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one. -
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Thank you for your kind comment.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
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