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Life Exhaled

On this The USA's fated month of sorrow
Brings a smile to my face for a change
For i too had a tragedy that forlorned me for years
But now my life is fresh and rearranged.

No longer am i fearful of that once that had harmed me.
No longer do i fret or fear walking out my door.
I still have much healing to pursue and partake.
The memory doesnt haunt me day and night, evermore.

I still jump at times due to the surprise of the noise.
Heart palpitates shock, lessened by heavenly love.
Thanks to those who have befriended me and cared.
I am slowly becoming normal, a new life thereof.

Fear no longer greats thy night, only joy filled abundance.
Grown in stregnth as each embraceable sunlit breath inhaled.
I care not what others think for i am existance personified.
I, Goddess of my soul, have exhaled.






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  • free4all1
    December 22, 2008
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    moving

    really empowering words Doll, I love this one xx


  • Chocolate Dime
    September 13, 2008
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    Aw, this was so vividly emotional and sad. It was a great read! Very powerful too.


  • isabellacohen
    September 13, 2008

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    heartfelt and wonderful

    you write very well.

    a wonderful sense of personal power you have invoked,

    best wishes,
    isabella


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    So much self power in this, you are the only one who can help yourself and should be proud of yourself. This is a great write!!!! Keep up the good work!!!


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine poignant write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • Walls-within
    September 13, 2008

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    This is really amazing...hope and overcomming the past. It radiates with a new life, it radiates with hope. This is an amazing poem...great job on this.


  • Melodies
    September 12, 2008

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    Gladness... YAY!

    Positive thinking mixed with cleverness and all-around SMART! Good going, fine poet.


  • im not broken
    September 12, 2008

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    this is really nice. the flow is good and the message is of course amazing. good write

    Sincerely,
    Toddy

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