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I hate you Petronella

So you decided to show up again.
Did you hear I lacked Internet,
Or that I am too busy to write?
 
You tickle me with such inspiration,
Give me so great ideas,
In the middle of my pooping...
 
I can't just get up and write,
I am a little busy right now,
Doing my daily business.
 
 
 
Or what about the times,
When my Internet goes bye-bye,
You give me so much to work on!
 
I try to write it all down on paper,
But it seems that evil pen is holding,
Some sort of curse like writers block.
 
All your idea's disappeared in seconds,
All stuck on my tongue like glue,
It seems only a computers key can undo.
 
 
 
Then we have the times I hate most,
When I have Internet and opportunity,
Just waiting, begging of you to hit me.
 
But do you, dear Petronella?
No, you leave me hanging in a line,
 Treathing me like a toy
 
May I say that you are my worst friend,
I wish you where a person,
For then I would let you know.

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  • Maxboy gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Very good, I too never thought of giving it a name, good idea to have a name to curse and yell at.

    Best wishes in the contest


  • ourgirlFriday
    December 14, 2008

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    Interesting...

    I've always maintained that my muse was the Holy Spirit...my writing, journal entries more than poems at times. I never thought to give my muse a name...a personality all it's own; seemed scizhoprenic to me...but it's just like naming a diary or teddy bear and talking to it when no one else will listen. I think my muse needed a vacation, so it took one.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 27, 2008

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    Very cute write, that damned muse does always come & go at its own choosing. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Florida Sunshine
    September 16, 2008

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    LOL ~ Well, Your the first to pen ~ this about their muse. As much as the sympathy I'd love to give... I can't help myself but to give a hardy chuckle... especially at the 'inconvient' inspirational moments.
    There is always T.P. to pen on in a pinch... Paper is paper right... [Said, in defense for poor Petronella.] ~
    But, then your saddled with the obsticle of the uncooperative pen...

    An entertaining read - from start to finish ~ Thank you so much for entering the contest - it is my pleasure to read and review your work.

    Best of luck to you,
    Florida Sunshine


    • Meroza
      September 17, 2008
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      Thank you for hosting this contest and for the shynie

      I had so much fun writing this, amazingly my muse aka Petronella didn't fail me during the write.


  • unavailable
    September 12, 2008
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    great write, loved it to much!


  • Lexie
    September 12, 2008

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    wow, great poem, i liked the comical side of it, but at the same time i and many other people know exactly what you are talking about. once again. great job.

    Then we have the times I hate most,
    When I have Internet and opportunity,
    Just waiting, begging of you to hit me.


    But do you, dear Petronella?
    No, you leave me hanging in a line,
    Treathing me like a toy



    trust me, i hate that to! lol

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