pack light
(breathe
and hold)
you won't need nothing
but there isn't much you will
rain and smoke
shuttle boarded
he sucked long and hard
on Buddha's cock
and rode the tie-dye to epiphany
Author notes
That trip cost me fifty bucks, but it was worth it.
A contest entry
- "precious and amusing and unutterably bizarre" by Polaja.
1050 points, ended September 24, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this poem - it has a rawness to it that is refreshing
I think that maybe some elaboration would be nice (maybe more parts in brackets to balance the first) - the ending was well done though I enjoyed this read, thank you for the entry!
Keep writing
Polly
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