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No Longer Shines

Thoughts of your attempted suicide
Stream straight down my face
When I think of our old memories
My heart begins to race
And I remember all those kisses
I still can almost taste...

*Chorus*
It's so hard for me to go on
Knowing you're not mine
All those times I let it go
Everytime you crossed the line..
Now my mind just floods with darkness..
You were the light.. My sun no longer shines..

Crashing now I'm burning
This storm has yet to pass
How could you give up?
How could you give up so fast?
I refuse to end like you
These words are NOT my last..

Broken down I'm tired
So alone yet so forgiving
So sick of being here
Just so sick of living
Without you by my side
So fucking sick of giving

It's so hard for me to go on
Knowing you're not mine
All those times I let it go
Everytime you crossed the line..
Now my mind just floods with darkness..
You were the light.. My sun no longer shines..

[[repeat chorus^]]

Sometimes...with broken people
You just have to let them go
But with needles in my fingertips
There's one thing I need to know...Just one thing I need to know
As the blood begins to flow
With such pain must've come regret
Why'd you never let it show?
Why wouldn't you let me know?

I always had you on my mind
I never could pretend
The butterflies were beautiful
Why did it have to end?
My questions die right on my tongue
They always go unanswered
Your lying eyes were beautiful
Why did it have to end?
I've forgotten what you said
and now I'll never know..
I'll never know.

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  • Aquamarine.
    April 8
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    iloveyou.. youso deserved gold.


  • Julie Leigh silver member
    November 10, 2008

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    These are some awesome lyrics. I pictured it playing on the radio. This is a powerful piece. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest

  • BabyBun silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    Hi - thanks for entering my contest - I enjoyed this. Best of luck!

  • neenz
    October 30, 2008

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    This poem/song really spoke to me. Especially this stanza:

    "Broken down I'm tired
    So alone yet so forgiving
    So sick of being here
    Just so sick of living
    Without you by my side
    So fucking sick of giving"

    Thank you for the entry!

    -N
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