two leaves
in my shoes
Summer passes by
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended September 16, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely haiku...the leaves and the passing season, captures an image and the phrase brings understanding...and agreement...congratulations on the well deserved Gold...h
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Like this a lot. I can see why it snagged a gold trophy. I've read a couple of your haiku's now, and you have a real talent for them.
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unusual take on the prompt . . congrats on the gold
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Yes! Spot on!
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Excellent
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Thank you for liking it
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Yes it does indeed pass by...so quickly and then the snows come...
"two more snow flakes
in my boot
winter never ends."
That is proof of why you write and I read.
Good luck in the contest, cute author name.
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