the soft of you
and warm brown
curve of your turn.
haloed sunlight
brushing your hair
into storm clouds
and silver linings.
the scent of you
red roses riding
open window breezes.
wind chime laughter
winding through
the house on wings.
your gentle heart
leading me to places
I could never go.
the shadow
of your eyes
brushing against
my deepest dreams.
how your most
delicate touch
can still in me things
that are too deep
for words.
A contest entry
- Mystery Of Love by SummerlandRayne.
499 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Adding Clappies!!!
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Amazing poem. Very touching and so enticingly beautiful. This is a wonderful entry and I do thank you for sharing it with me.
Blessings~
Az -
Love is a great Muse ...
it turns all souls into poets.
And: some into poets supreme.
Myra
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Tenderly beautiful. The kind of divine love poetry that is timeless and universally touching. Just melting. Sot and seductive....to stop writing like this would be a crime against humanity.
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This is such a gently flowing piece of devotion to thought. An endearing glimpse of the heart and affection that breeds within. More thank words can even express... Love at its finest. Beautiful write!
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OhhhhhhhK I'll marry you...hahahahahahahahaha.
My goodness friend, you get better and better!
"and warm brown
curve of your turn"
"red roses riding
open window breezes"
"how your most
delicate touch
can still in me things
that are too deep
for words."
This poem is too deep for words, absolutely amazing!!
a quote to share....
"The fish trap exists because of the fish. Once you've gotten the fish you can forget the trap. The rabbit snare exists because of the rabbit. Once you've gotten the rabbit, you can forget the snare. Words exist because of meaning. Once you've gotten the meaning, you can forget the words. Where can I find a man who has forgotten words so I can talk with him?" ~Chuang Tzu "
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yes, this is a nice change from the dark stuff...lol...
this is so gorgeous - every stanza
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WOW
i could feel this into my toes......... wonderful images lifting my thoughts....... lovely
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it's a sweet happy poem so full of love.
each word is soft and tender. the opening line and the closing stanza are both my favorite.
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This is a beautiful love poem rich in detail and all the things that make that special someone special to you. Loved the soft voice here... the closing stanza is lovely.
~ Nicolette
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