I remember…
The stars were actively aligning themselves,
preparing the real world to welcome a little Virgo
who would possess a different kind of heart..
So brave and so beautiful; she could sacrifice hers for others,
naively vulnerable angel.
I remember all this because I was one of the stars…
Author notes
I am the universe, I am life! I can make the Sun cry! I made a woman to be the ideal companion on earth and in the stars, to be forever happy, anywhere- the Sun can't do this! - weeping sun..
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday to Kazytc! by Karlie67.
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Hmm, not really what I asked for try and read the rules properly next time.
This is a well written piece each of the words you have used has a different meaning, its nice to think about the meaning rather than have it handed to you on a platter. Well done an dgood luck! -
please read the rules!
this was very well penned... nicely done even though I think you could've done much more here in writing more. I am not such a big fan of short writes... nicely done! -
good,, love always
erica carnea
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Awwwww this is to sweet.
Where was my birthday poem?
Just kidding. This is very different.
Well done.
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Awww how lovely and sweet!
What a delightful poem this is lovely and I am so moved the words and sentiments are beautiful as are you for writing this lovely well written and expressed poem of moving touching words of wisdom and feeling.
Thanks Millions its a lovely birthday poem!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Hahaha Love it!
Now how did you know she was a virgo?!
THank you tons for you lovely entry
I can't wait to show her
xxxx
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