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flying away (tanka)




flying away
with the songbirds
autumn leaves
just a crow cawing
in the churchyard







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  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    the second haiku was very good i think both did well but i liked the second one the most


  • azure85 gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    Very pretty look at the beginning of autumn, with the gentle touch of your haiku. Thought provoking, as we are left behind while the birds have the freedom to fly.