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what is already dead (H.M.)

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Nightmare of his dishevelled silhouette
conjures the inevitable realisation of my darkest dread
being once again chased from night to night
from creaking doors to blood soaked sheets
only I know this time
he cannot kill what is already dead



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Poem inspired by the contest picture

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 10

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    Great imagery. So much said in such a short amount of words. This is a great write. Makes me think of memories of my own, some that I had locked away bc they were too painful to think about, yet...maybe...I should just move them out of the way.Teriffic write!!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    The imagery through out this poem is excellent, its very dark... I really enjoyed the last 3 lines a lot..

    good luck in the cotnest

    kat


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    OOoh wicked ending! Love this, 'creaking doors to blood soaked sheets' wow, that covers so many dark and horrific thoughts Excellent take, good luck