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In Rainbows ( Silver )


Storms of  the day passes,

through patchwork of cloud,

breaks a upturn grin,

light reflecting lustre,

creation of natures kaleidoscope,

coloured my rainbow.

 

Vibrant confidence of inner-self,

fast tracks to surface,

No longer hidden in hollows,

where dark nights shed nightmares,

upon who I once was.

 

For now I look up,

inhale the sweetness of life

take breath..

and see the magic unfurl

before my very eyes.


Author notes

Word Bank 1

breath x
red
hollow x
vibrant x
succulent
rainbow x
grinx

hair
charlie
chocolate
deep
milk
throat

My first ever Word Bank.. did my best

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    for this being the first time doing a word bank, this is outstanding.. I absolutely love this so much.. the imagery is Fantastic. :0

    good luck

    kat


  • trekkergirl
    September 20, 2008
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    wow you wrote with a word bank. That's kinda hard to do I think. At least for me it is. Good job


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thank you
      It was a words bank and my first one too..
      Glad I gave it a go
      Best wishes
      Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    a brilliant take on the word bank julie the imagery is brilliant good luck in the contest my friend marina


  • daviscth silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job with this word bank sis. Maybe you should do them more often. Good luck in the contest.


  • aboomer silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Great job done with that word bank! Love the wording, images, depth and flow to this - and great ending.
    best wishes in your contest


  • In Too Deep1
    September 12, 2008

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    Such a beautiful and inspirational take on the word bank. It is always a joy to read of one's rise from darkened clouds and corridors. Life churns in so many directions, often leaving sight dizzied and in array. It takes inner strength to surf the silver of such darkness. After the storm, there is nothing more beautiful than the rainbow of hope and wisdom that remains. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp

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