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"Lycisca"












Roman enough
with that snarl
that kept the daggars beneath her breasts
sheathed but still sharp,

something is always to be left out,
already written
in an old man's memoir
carved on a stele in a shadowed
corner of the forum,

the cats just move the shit around
how strangely the drinker eludes his drink
the stripes ripple at sunset
muscles of unrest.


the next lover always timid
in her stare.

Given time,
the stretch of imperial halls
will dim the bloody nails;

the broad backs raked
fall into  dusty bone

the emperor another crippled
wreck
and the ship of state
sunk between her
well rowed thighs

as blossoming boys
write sighs into the walls
of the ruin
of another long night.

Author notes

"Lycisca"--Latin "Wolf-Girl"



See Valeria Messalina,
see also, Sarah Palin.

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  • Rowan gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    "the cats just move the shit around
    how strangely the drinker eludes his drink
    the stripes ripple at sunset
    muscles of unrest."
    I loved that stanza.
    Excellent all the way around.


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    In composure, it is the silent weapon sheathed that usually brings about the undoing of things, the inner quality of a voice that speaks and with no obvious outward signs that she lies, of course a nose like Pinocchio may help this, but we have only our intuition to tell us what is and what isn't. I like very much. C


  • IronIcecream
    September 12, 2008

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    messalina loved gladii enough not to hide it
    same story
    different faces
    more hypocrisy - must be anglosaxon puritanism - and that explains the short span of the "empire"

    I wonder if irony isn't the only law that governs this world... "and god gave the world to evil"
    and when he decided is not enough he gave it to evil rednecks
    those are more efficient at destroying things

    whoa


  • sullivanthepoet
    September 12, 2008
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    "and the ship of state
    sunk between her
    well rowed thighs"... Magisterial!


  • cvillelisa
    September 12, 2008

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    You've always had a knack for showing us the future through the past with your poems. Or showing us how things never do really change that much.

    I'm frightened. I really am frightened.

    Check this out:

    http://www.thenation.com/doc/20080929/wypijewski




    I'll consider my critical comment in a bit. Too true this.


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    lol Well you were going to get a proper comment until I read your author notes and now I have to come back because I am laughing too much C

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