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Life Is A Lie

I love this girl, more than ever
But she is leaving, finding another lover
I want her by my side, for the long run
But she obviously doesn't want that fun
She has the prettiest face, she doesn't think that though
She thinks nobody likes her, she doesn't notice me though
She ignores my liking of her, as if I'm just a fly
I love her, I love her, but she won't give it a try
If this is what life is, I want to die
Life should change, LIFE IS A LIE!

Spead your mind friends.

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  • Lj-
    September 28, 2008
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    Hmm, I hope this isn't what you believe you believe in.


  • kel dog
    September 19, 2008
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    sad, emotional, sweet how you dont want to give her up. i like it. great write.

  • saretyuiop
    September 12, 2008

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    Wow, a powerful statement you have here... I like how you refered to yourself as a fly on the wall, but you aren't to me.