As cosmos merges in reflective hue
the threads of time are interwoven
and space creates a vibrant pattern
unifying all dimensions.
With hypnotic flow in scenes everchanging
this is a mystery of fluidity,
as colours merge in fresh concoctions
in awe just right before our eyes.
Arrangements that seem unpredictable
are a paragon of well planned figures,
design frames for future forms
and the universe generates this blueprint.
A composition in perfect tune
devised for balance throughout construction,
what appears as threads all unconnected
merely change direction in fiery aplomb.
Author notes
AliceinPoetryland
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A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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And you got all this from that picture. OK, you have some serious talent because all I saw was a mish-mash of colours. Excellent vocabulary and construction. Best to you in the contest
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Good composition and flow, and the lines
Arrangements that seem unpredictable
are a paragon of well planned figures,
are particularly appealing. I think that way myself, that things which seem random follow a pattern too big for my to conceive. Nice poem.
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Nicely done! Great wording, flow and images. I especially LOVE the line,
'the threads of time are interwoven' - what a wonderful line!!
I also really like how you have ended this,
'A composition in perfect tune
devised for balance throughout construction,
what appears as threads all unconnected
merely change direction in fiery aplomb'
Thank you for such a lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest
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