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As the Sun Shines Over Flesh canyons.

 

(c)-Art-Whimsically Yours Studio-MFB III

 

 

The sun shines today in flesh canyon.
The only sounds from it's depth are the clack of plastic buckets,
accompanied by the gasps of men uncovering the sticky residue of the dead.

Perhaps Cori's husband who in his last call said,
" Cori, I think a bomb just hit here, I'm having trouble breathing---
I don't think we're going to make it out of here. I just wanted you to know I love you."

Heavy machinery lifts a large section of debris, uncovering a
group of mangled corpses in protective gear.
Gear that was only good to four hundred pounds of pressure per square inch.
Thus one large stain remains, marking the efforts of some heroic firefighters last stand.

The harbour winds whistle in the nooks and crannys, a haunting sound
like the howling of an air raid siren, issuing loud, but much too late.
The breeze's journey disturbs the paper thin remains and carries
the stench of yesterday, to the huddled masses yearning
to breathe free for just an hour or so.

I sat with a Fire Deptartment Chaplain Monday night, who had been in the rubble
of flesh canyon for five days, administering to the shocked and disillusioned 
He came to a poetry reading after I had invited him to attend and he brought
a piece of the World Trade center given to him as he left New york City.

A chunk of concrete smoke tinted and smelling of fire and fear.
I touched it and expected something more besides it's roughened texture,
but then I realized it was just remains. It is all just remains.
The sun shines in flesh canyon but no warmth is felt, no light can brighten
for here peace has fallen to pieces. I touched a remnant of that peace
broken and jagged, and later cried for what it took with it in it's tumbles.

History will remember the facts, reactions, politics, retaliation
and the resulting aftershocks but I will remember the people, the faces
and the voices, not yet disembodied on cell phones echoing through my memories.

From an elevator a lady cries, "We're all dying in here."
A man hollers, "Tell us how to survive till you reach us." and Cori's husband
composing a farewell that could move the stone faces on Easter island to weep.

Just past flesh canyon, the scent of the hot dog carts,
the saurkraut, and the onions mingle with the oderous wafts
of death and burning rubber.

People pass by, stomaches churning but it's just meat,
Ketchup and pulp, footlongs and kosher, freshly boiled,
grilled, roasted, and skewered with red flesh drippings
wrapped in dough and peddled to the masses.

It's just meat and life goes on as they bring out the dead 
long past the time of sunset
in the vaporous lights that hold vigil over flesh canyon

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis --(9-26-01


 

 

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  • IronMaiden1236
    October 7, 2008

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    (Bows)~~~

    Thank You, so many images I just couldn't write, ripping, raw and real..I simply choke remembering.
    IM


  • Kari gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    Wow, I am just so amazed at this piece I don't even know what to say..you've done very well here and I thank you for your entry


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    An amazing touching piece that brought tears to my eyes. You are right. The world will remember the politics, and reactions. But who will remember the faces? The pleas for help? Some saying their last goodbye... Some not getting to say it at all... Brilliantly emotional write. Thank you!



  • artis
    September 14, 2008
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    Sorry about the lines, can't seem to remove them.


  • requiempoet gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    touching. I remember where I was that day. I was in 8th grade. Fourth period art class.

    I still cry when I think about it.


  • georgie
    September 12, 2008

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    another brilliant piece artis... captures the hopelessness, heartache and spirits of all ivolved and yet with such a hopeful ending. twas a tragic day that affected ppl worldwide. a friend of mine had a pic of him taken on top just b4 it happened. u just never know...
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx
    ps. good luck with the contest

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