Tried hard not to fall for you
But you offered your heart, honest and true
Strangers kept apart in distance and age
2 years between us, under-age love is all the rage
A contest entry
- Trying Hard Not To Fall or ... Love is Falling apart by piccola.
600 points, ended September 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
yup yup lol
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but then ... as time passes the 2 years is not long at all. My husband is 4 years my senior and it is nothing. Of course neither of us was underage when we fell in love so that does make a difference. Thank you for entering.
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It doesn't have to suck, give yourself time, let things go slow and naturally. It can also last a long long time.
This could have been me 30 years ago. I was sent out of start to separate us. It was the purest love I have ever felt or known, and the only true one.
You did a nice job here. and though there are some lovely writes here, you are one of the few who followed the contest guidelines.
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yea i kno, awwwww im glad u can relate. thank you 4 ur comment and yea lol i kno im beginning to think tht ppl dont kno how to read
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loved this poem,,, I just wish you were older.
under-age love does suck, but I must say your beautiful
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thank you, i wish i was older too. and yea it does,
awww thanks so much u made me blush! 
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this is a cute poem you say so much in a few lines (32 words)
good luck in the contest
and as always wifey keep up the wonderful writing
~Amy
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hehe thanks i tried. lol just 32 words is harder than it looks when u have so much to say.
love ya wifey
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nice take on the prompt my love you really did a great excellent job here i enjoyed this good luck in the contest
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thanks, im glad u liked reading it.
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love it !!
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ty hunni
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lol short and sweet babe and yet still a brilliant poem
my fave part well all of it i must admit
Tried hard not to fall for you
But you offered your heart, honest and true
Strangers kept apart in distance and age
2 years between us, under-age love is all the rage
well done babe
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lol thanks it woulda been longer but the contest asked 4 32 words of rhyme. awwwww hehe
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