Now I must say good bye
I'm not that pretty
Nor am I really smart
All I know is in my heart
I make alot of mistakes
And forget things I have to do
I finish the race in third place
Please don't cry for me too
I'm not special
I'm not the same
It be better to end the game
I only have this one wish
Can you swear on your life this
My final request for you all
That no one will cry at my funeral
Please don't dread on reasons why
Now is the time to say good bye.
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Great write!
This is not something you currently feel right? I really hope not. But this is a damn good write! It's got a great flow and rythym too. You did a great job with the powerful ending as well!

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I had a radom moment of dispear and this poem ran through my head so I wrote it down. My moments don't last long. Just a moment.
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WOW
WOW this poem great yet sad.. i really liked it the way you rhymed all the verses
I hope I'll be as a good as you one day...x you have some good poems keep writing.
Natasha ..x




