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Ride the Moon!

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Dedicated to All Moon Riders!

 



Mum said I was a Cancerian,
So I am ruled by the Moon,
Wanted to be a Veterinarian,
When I 'grow up too soon'!

I thought the moon was made of cheese,
Must admit I am partial to that,
Mum knew that a slice would please,
With a smile like a Cheshire cat!

I am riding my slice of the moon,
Up here in the starry skies,
My how those moon beams beam,
So brightly in my eyes!

I love the fluffy white clouds here,
They look like cotton wool,
And all this I am dreaming so clear,
My how the sky's a pull!

Don't you just love to dream,
When you can fantasize,
When things are never as they seem,
But you want to realize!

I want to be the golden girl,
Who lives up on the moon,
And eternally stay a little pearl,
That won't grow up too soon!

 

 

Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes



Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
Contest Semi Quickie contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady
I loved these three little paintings by artist LisaJane.



Picture Option Selected:
Option 1
Reach for the stars

Picture depicts a little girl sitting on a golden crescent
moon in the sky at night!

 

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  • Leonura
    October 23, 2008
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    Tis such a wonderful write. somethig that truly brings a smile to the readers heart.


  • Erica Carnea
    October 12, 2008
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    love it

    i loved this poem i think the rhyming is great
    love always
    erica carnea


  • grandniem
    October 3, 2008

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    Awesome Kaz!!!

    This is just adorable,..and I love it!!

    I am riding my slice of the moon,
    Up here in the starry skies,
    My how those moon beams beam,
    So brightly in my eyes!

    This my favorite lines!
    Riding a slice of the moon is vivid imagery that stands out!
    an awesome write my dear friend, just wonderful!!
    love hugs and blessimgs,

    Grace


    • Kazytc silver member
      October 3, 2008
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      Awwww Thanks Millions Grace!

      Awww Thanks millions Grace, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xxxxx


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 2, 2008

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    I love this poem it made me smile all the way through!!! Your words are so sweet soft and very beautiful!!! The pictures are amazing!! This is a very incredible write Kaz!!! I absolutely Adorte it!!

    • Kazytc silver member
      October 3, 2008

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      Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions Sis , for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 27, 2008

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    Very clever write, and beautiful pictures to accompany it. Thank you for entering the contest.

    ♥
    whisper

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Thanks Millions Whisper!

      Thanks millions Whisper, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

  • Emmanuel Cant
    September 26, 2008

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    Oh, this is soooo wonderfully spun fun, fun fun, indeed! great and potent seasonal stuff here! bravo...

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • Gwenevere
    September 18, 2008
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    AWW!!!!! I really like this.It appeals to the child in all of us.Simply lovely.Well done, Ros

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Thanks millions Julie!

      Awww Thanks millions Julie, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    A beautiful story you have poetically penned
    Enchanting .. tales..
    Enjoyed your poem very much, and the added images and background are sweet
    Best wishes fine poet
    thank you for your entry
    Julie


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Great take on the picture and rhymed with excellent Flow & Meter.
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Wow this was a beautiful write!
    Gorgeous imagery and metaphors
    weaved within your words.
    Loved the innocence you portrayed
    of the little girl on the moon.
    Such a cute poem for children
    I am going to show this one to my sister
    for sure

    Lovely elaborations & very well-crafted
    & originally thought out.

    Best of luck in the contest

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • Rclane gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Nicely penned with smooth flow and imagery. Best to you in contest.

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    You have a wonderful talent for the fantasy side of things, I could see this as a nursery rhyme fairytale read to children at night to get a giggle. Your rhyme is flawless and beautiful. Best to you

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 13, 2008
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      Awww thanks Millions .. giggle!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it. I must admit my sense of fun and humour likes to come out to play, its harder for me to be serious! I adore the fun and pleasure kids bring and I love their free spirit, it matches mine and the eternal child within me refuses to age that's why I am the eternal juvenile geriatric delinquent I am! Giggle! Food for though on your comments you are a sweetie for those!
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all. Your work is excellent and phenomenal like you!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • solitarytear
    September 13, 2008

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    wow

    this has a child like feel to it that captures your heart and pulls......amazing write here.....every word is a piece of art.....you brought a moment in a little girls memory alive......you amazes me each time with the deepth to each and everyone of your poems.....never stop writing kaz coz it would be a crime in my eyes if you did......hugsssssssssss you tight

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 13, 2008
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      Melt Melt!

      Awwwww you are such a sweetie I am sooo touched by your words, you are so lovely and kind and what a lovely review you have so kindly given me here too, you too should never stop writing you move me with your words and phenomenal talent, you are a very special lady and I can see you going a long long way in life too. If the world had more people like you in it then this planet would be heaven istelf, you are an angel.
      Thanks millions for your fab and moving review which has melted me so much here, wow what a beautoful review to get up to this morning you have really made my day.
      Loads of hugs to you too and thanks millions and millions for your lovely kind moving and melting review of my poem, I guess the eternal child within me wrote this one!
      It would be a crime if you stopped writing too. Are you in print? If not then you really ought to be. How about I sponsor you to get published by my publisher?
      Poetic Hugs & Thanks Mjillions and millions and best of luck in all contests, hope you win gold in them all.
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx xx


  • Lowell Poe
    September 12, 2008

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    Come on lass,
    lets go space trucking...
    Come on!
    Yea !
    Love this piece!
    Lots of stardust and magic.

    ....I am riding my slice of the moon....

    Sometimes thats all thats up there,
    so you gotta take me as a passenger.
    This piece had a very mystical feel,
    lots and lots of wonderment.
    Writing poetry is like setting the stage...making a movie...putting the reader in a place that you want them to be.
    You have accomplished this and so much more.
    Starry starry nights belong to you in this wonderful piece of escape.

    I am just a poor boy,
    deserves 5 stars and when i get them i will be back to put them on some on other pieces of your fine art.

    Bless you alway gypsy,
    LOWELL

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 13, 2008
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      You are a 5 + star poet and reviewer !

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it. What lovely words you write I am touched!
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

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