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Quietly Fallen

Stricken softly by your touch.
Your voices velvet texture
sending needles through my skin.
Your bedtime story,
repeated over and over throughout the years.

The only repetitiveness I care for.

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  • Rock-Junkie
    September 12, 2008

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    wow! short, but filled with powerful words. nice use of the title, indeed. something I didnt expect - but thats a good thing ;] Great job and good luck in my contest!!