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Fairy Tale Lie

      You promised me a perfect life
      An everlasting lullabye
      But the only thing I got from you
      Was a fairy tale lie

      Thanks for filling me with false hopes
      I appreciate the sappy books
      The ones with sunshiny-everything-works-out-endings
      The kind girls like me scratch out with ink pen
     
     
      So where did it all go wrong?
      Since when did the princess wear a lime pink thong?
      Is it something I said, did, or think?
      The childhood dreams only darkened my future
      A broken girl lost in a fairy tale lie
      Cinderella, Snow White, Beauty and the Beast
      The candy coated world of disney only sickens my heart
      If it were that easy I'd already have my soul mate
      A boyfriend with pearly teeth and a fast car
      The only fairy tale place that's meant for me is
      A place far, far away, a place where love can't find me.

Author notes

Yeah got kinda lazy wrote this at 4 in the morning hope you like it.

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  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 1, 2008

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    This is so good!! A twist on the realization of all the things we girls are told growing up!! Great job on this!!


  • jcat gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    "A broken girl lost in a fairy tale lie"

    I love that line!!! A very awesome take on the prompt here!! You proved that love is indeed just a lie told to us as children at bedtime...Very well done and thank you for your entry