i am a rat in your sewer
a scavenger to your woods
a speck of dirt in your universe
a grubby child begging at your knee
the worst things you've ever heard
the saddest feelings you've ever felt
i am you when you ran over a dog by accident
i am you as you tripped and fell through glass
i am an eyelash thats poking you
and an image you try to supress
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I love it!!! great work hun
short, simple, and deep. amazing!
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I was curious by your first line and had to read on. The first two lines are interesting and I wish I could read more about that and maybe the "last breath". That is intreging. However, you are not, "a speck of dirt", or "black death". I know you are writing from your core being, but, there is some really good metaphor in this prose. I may be way off, my poems are very simple. You are a deep thinker. Return the favor?
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