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Short Lil' Poem

I see your face,
Tension so strong.
I hate,
Holding back so long.
Your breath on my neck,
Says you want me.
Theres care in your eyes,
That says you haunt me.

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  • piccola silver member
    September 19, 2008
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    good job. Thank you for sticking to the rules. The word count and the rhyme which was great.