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Is This A Lie

Love is but a feeling missed
you know its there but all in bliss

the feelings growing every day
but from his arms you can not stay

you want to laugh but only cry
you ask for change he dosent try

you see he loves you care in his eyes
but every day the less he tries

he raises his hand in the reddened bliss
where will he hit or will he miss?

you try to cry the tears dont come
you go outside to think your numb

you have your friends they back you up

but no one understands this stuff

 

now its time to sit and sigh

do i realy love him or is this a lie?

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  • LordMaccie
    October 29, 2008

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    wow.

    emotional piece of writing!

    i feel your pain. and i think everybody at one point or another asks the same questions, you have cleverly portrayed in this.