Her thoughts her own;
gossamer wings sparkle
in reflected moonbeams;
with sad downcast eyes
this fairy sadly mourns
every time a child
stops believing.
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NICE!
Short, simple, painted well! A perfect picture!!
-Howard
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Excellent
A wonderful creation. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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well done . . liked "sad downcast eyes" and "every time a child stops believing" . .
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Your choice of words so gently touch our eyelids as we read, and then your association of the sad fairy mourning "every time a child stops believing" makes this a treasure of a write...Bookmarking!
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So precious, I was surprised how sad I was by the end of this. Quite the impact this little poem had on me. I see you are quite inspired by backgrounds. You do them very well fine poet. Best to you. Thank you for the hoodwinking
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A beautiful and touching poem. The words are so heartfelt. Losing my son last year was the saddest day of my life. Thank you for sharing this lovely thoughtful poem. Bless You, Sandy
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Ohh I love the border!! This poem is so beautiful, yes it is sad when some children stop believing I know I will always be a child at heart and always will believe in fairies. Thanks for sharing, hugs Theresa
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Liked the presentation on this page - they fit right with the image you have used in the side bar. Still many new children that believe all the time, making up for those who no longer do.
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aw this a wonderful yet sad write, i love the simplicity, yet depth. kep writting and take care
Stephanie ♥
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VERY NICELY PENNED
"this fairy sadly mourns
every time a child
stops believing." i LIKE THAT part it adds a very soft touch to this
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This is just perfect of the image. Your words describe her so well. Very well done my good bad girl
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