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Forever Wide

We dance around each other
with an airy, cloudy grace.
The light from your fingertips finding mine
shines on my cloudy face.

This is all I need to feel-
This is all I need to heal.

Forever I keep falling,
not once hitting the end.
You recognize my weaknesses,
and I"ll never have to pretend,
pretend again...

And I'm not in this alone.

This is all I need to feel-
You are all I need to heal.

How can you see us from up where you died?
Every tear, every heartache, each desperate cry...
And still I am learning,
but never once doubting
the everlasting sky.
His arms forever wide...

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  • Sunkissed xo
    September 26, 2008

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    This is a wonderful write, very sorrowful yet full of love and hope at the same time. It is lovely, a great write.

    - Katie


  • aligurl
    September 25, 2008

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    Yes... I loved this poem. I pictured 2 of you dancing around and around with light sparking from your finger tips. I felt this poem I hope someone else will too. thank you for the entry and good luck in my contest.