you awaken to a bright light
which dilates your eyes
blurring the objects within your vision,
from a reality of a single perspective
a role played fantasy land awaits you
with no truths or lies
only ideas from the insane ramblings
from an untimed consciousness
thats hazed with perfect clarity,
if you unlock the doors
to the places elsewhere
an incorrect statement will meet you
and a jester, will stand firmly before you
making jokes of the position of all,
and if you were to suffer from self denial
it would cause the man behind the door
to laugh,
outrageously.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4261335
Comments
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These were three interesting pieces. I have never been high.. in fact never even smoked a cigarette..drunk from alcohol maybe a couple times. I have seen many a people high especially students, but reading about it was interesting.
The first poem "Consciousness"
was a good descriptive poem.
The second poem "Watching oblivions inferio night" sky..
this poem I liked because you brought up the issue of reality and it seems every individual creates their own reality through lots of things beliefs along with many other factors so I liked that you touched that in this poem.
The third poem "High" just reminded me of being on the streets which is where you were I am assuming in the poem.
And I told you it was ok to leave these since you did all that work puting the poems together.
Thank you for entering the contest.
MJ -
slick poem
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