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Dark Existence




Down in the abysmal icy depths,
pressures intolerable; existence stark
Lives nothing that we know for sure
but perilous doom and deadly dark

Colorless weight without a sound
with nothing you can see
Crushed and ready to implode
barren of debris

BLACKNESS the agenda there
daring those to come
Dancing wash of nothingness
to which all will succumb


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  • Frozentearz
    September 16, 2008

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    Blackness can be the agenda for many I can only hope that it does not become mine
    Thanks for joining in.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • smonte19124 gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    Wonderfully descriptive dark write. I feel depression weighting you down but I can only say "Hold On", better days are coming. I'm trying very hard not to feel this way myself so I understand. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 11, 2008
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    Great write hon!!!!!!