The fall of dusk,
One life comes to us,
another one is taken away....
With every rise of the moon,
every set of the sun,
life makes changes upon us,
Together we fall,
Together we rise.....
Those unrequited emotions lost,
those whose hearts hath wasted their warmth,
We who have expelled our love...
The stars that which twinkle,
The empty blackness that swallows us,
The light that saves us,
Friends who defend each other,
and Foes who strengthen us...
Without her touch,
There's no strength for me to fight,
Wake me to the world,
The world so clear,
Yet life so cloudy,
What's this worth without that guiding hand?
Together we'll go unto hell,
Together we'll see the Rise of Dawn.....
A contest entry
- Can You Hear? by Celtic Legend.
450 points, ended September 20, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you,
I'm glad you like it.
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Just the title drew me in! That's all it needed, and the words in the poem gave it even more! Simply enthralled at the whole thing. I absolutely love it!
The emotion is so evident, and it's so easy and/or pleasurable to read!
Definitely amazing. ^.^
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