Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Willow

I remember when the willow stood
Casting her protective shadow on my naïve form
Great long branches tickled my skin in the moonlight
Safe under her curtain, I striped my mind

No one could have told me things were bad
I didn’t see the difference, I stood a chance
You said you had wings to fly
But I could glide on my own

I remember the night it burned
The embers fell around me, standing
Foolish, thinking I needed her no more
I took an ashen leaf in remembrance

Alone now, un-protected I crumble
No longer ignorant, my thoughts collect
I can’t do this on my own, but I can try
My curtain, gone forever, burned

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • gullionmar
    September 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    nice

    well written piece how true of things in life ,we take comfort knowing these tings exist but then just like that they are gone keep up the good writing


  • gypsiessoul
    September 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I really enjoyed reading this piece..It flow nicely...Thankyou for sharing