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At Heaven's Gate

hidden
beyond phantom
of Pluto’s cold shadow
while Cerebrus strains at hell’s gates,
Charon’s
passage refused
for entrance to hades,
soul’s eternal flight decays hope
fading
sun’s obscure lure
to welcome him closer,
outcast among giants as spins
vapors
of ignorance,
intent on their own fate,
cast upon cosmos’ dark sidelines,
he waits

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  • islekine gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    This is beautifully done!!!

    Thank you so much for your wonderful words and beautiful form!!! And thanks for penning something fresh...
    Write on!