So what if the magic is gone?
that the cast is all wrong?
raise the curtain, the show must go on
A contest entry
- [{A contest for the lazy and/or bored!}] by SmartBrick.
330 points, ended September 20, 2008, 37 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The show must go on, and life must go on, despite the trials of life. This puts it very succinctly, and does justice to the theme. My only criticism is that the poem is a bit cliched.
But it obviously touched someone, because it got a gold. Poetry is subjective that way.
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Like this a lot. Congrats on the gold trophy for it, it was well deserved. Best of luck in future contests.
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would be nice if you spelled the TITLE of your poem correctly - SHOW MUST GO ON (not ONE)
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heh yeah I am a horrible typer/speller
thanks hah..I checked over the poem ltos, but I didn't look at the title...ADD lol...can't beleive I didn't notice that
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YES!YES!YES YES YES!!!I LOVE acting and I find this a true point!Even if it's not the best preformed play in the world,the show must still go on!!!!YES!!!!(Loved it by the way!)
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thanks
I love acting to, and everyone seems to do a bit of it day to day lol
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